English term
Manhole floating
or The liquefaction induced manhole floating during earthquake
The above is OK? Someone said manhole floating or floating of manhole is strange.
Please advice.
Feb 13, 2015 07:27: Shera Lyn Parpia changed "Level" from "Non-PRO" to "PRO"
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Responses
manholes floating due to liquefaction
However, I would suggest this sort of wording would sound more natural and less awkward — as long as you can then join onto it whatever follows.
Please post the complete sentence right to the end, so we can help you better.
floating manhole cover
Btw, what was liquefied here?
I'd say
The liquefaction caused the sewer manhole cover to (rise and) float after the earthquake
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Yvonne Gallagher
: with Tony. What is Pro about this?
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neutral |
B D Finch
: See my discussion comment: it seems the entire manhole can float!
2 hrs
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magdadh
: ANYTHING can float if liquefaction occurs... whole houses sometimes.
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agree |
jccantrell
: Yeah, it would be the cover, not the manhole itself. Happens here in California when it just rains too much and there is enough water to force its way out the manhole.
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liquefaction caused manholes to float / Manholes floated due to liquefaction
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Tony M
: Depending on how the rest of the sentence is structured, either of these could lead to a more idiomatic rendering.
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Thanks Tony
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Discussion
"Buried tanks and manholes may float in the liquefied soil due to buoyancy". The grammar in both the Asker's suggestions is still wrong.
The use of the gerund 'floating' in this way reads as stilted and awkward, and is best avoided in EN as it needs handling with some care — especially when qualified with the equally awkward 'liquefaction-induced'.